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The Key to My Heart

Missing that other half.

The one that was made for me by the creatures hand.

Molded with care from a grain of sand.

 

Every curve shaped with a squinted eye.

Soft skin that was made oh so devine.

Each cell place with correct accuracy.

Cause you are the match for me.

 

The mannequin positioned for the starting point.

Makeing every bone fit with every joint.

Designing lips at percise grooves.

They were made to speak, made to move.

 

You complete me.

I wish you could see.

You're everything I'm not but strive to be.

 

From your head to your toes.

From your lips to your feet.

You were made to intertwine with me.

The Key to my heart, the one to set me free.

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@poetsdesire44  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
Thank you so much! :)
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poetsdesire44   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
I admire the words you use, so descriptive I strive to words so well written.
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@Darklord64  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
True..Thank you for your help. :)
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@CrystalH17Luv  Darklord64   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
no worries, thats part of what this kinda forum is about :)
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@Darklord64  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
Thanks. lol Although I've never been good at grammar or spelling. :D
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Darklord64   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
cause; the things that precedes effect
'cause; the abreviated form of because
other than that it was beautiful :)
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@Amdusias  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
Ah thank you so much! I shall make revisions lol I could never spell anyways ;)
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@CrystalH17Luv  Amdusias   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
mannequins* no worries,It's an uncommon word.
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@Amdusias  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
lol I probably didnt spell it right.But you know the life like figures you dress up. They stand them up in stores to model clothes. :D sorry about that.
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Amdusias   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
"The ---manican--- positioned for the starting point."

I tried to find the definition of the word "manican" but I can't seem to find one. Can you explain to me what the word means?
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@maggiecalea  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
thank you :)
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maggiecalea   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
WHOAA :D that is great :))
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