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Just A Ride...

I have no more patience
words will have to do,
I’ve found what I was looking for.
This time it’s about you

It’s time to wake up
The time has come to see
that “life” is an illusion
that it’s just another dream

Ask not how it matters
just stand up on  your feet
you do not wish to know
soon enough you will see

It’s time to wake up
don’t be so naive
reality is a framework
built by what you believe

No effort,no loss
just a simple choice
between what you think you are
and what you always have been.

It’s time to wake up
the time has come to feel
so decide through your feelings
what you think is real

Think about what you know
war has never changed
what is so special
about our place and age?

It’s time to wake up
just notice the lies
on television, the news
just open your eyes!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vX1CvW38cHA

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moiuik   -   1 month ago   -   Reply
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@loverz166  Amdusias   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
I am grateful.
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loverz166   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
wow. i love this poem. its amazing!
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@Amdusias  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
No problem :)
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@search4me  Amdusias   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
He was a great man,and his dramatic end of life only added to the weight of his messages. But I noticed more and more people are becoming aware of the things that are real in the world. Slowly,but without a doubt,humanity is walking towards the point where we always should have been.
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search4me   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
A brilliant message that people would be foolish to dismiss. We are drip-fed lie after lie, encouraging us to hate and to believe war is the only solution. We need more free-thinkers in this world! This is a great poem. Oh, and Bill Hicks rocks!!
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okgogo4949   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
this is prefect thanks!
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@rickrowling  Amdusias   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
Yay! Thank you. It means a lot to me.
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rickrowling   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
This is really good I would love to read more from this author. Great!
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@CrystalH17Luv  Amdusias   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
I have not heard of him previously,even thou I love reading quotes. Thank you for the feedback :)
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CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
I absolutely love this poem! The part that says, that“life” is an illusion
that it’s just another dream. I love that. It reminds me of one of my favorite quote by Pedro Caldron de la Barca "For life is a dream, and dreams themselves are only dreams". Great work! :)
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