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What of truth beyond reality’s grin?
Of suffering faith in self proclaimed kings?
Do I dwell in my heart’s fear architecture,
Revealing motion and invisible strings?
Or am I the architect for the coming of things?

What of beauty,farthest stars and skies?
Of reaching to see beyond your eyes?
Could it be I react to imagination’s tricks,
a blindly constructed truth of a slippery lie?
Or does doubt condition the unrest of mind?

What of the cold stream of tradition?
Of this sudden silence I hear?
As if humanity faces It’s fears
staring another apparition of war.
Am I being a fool for focusing attention.
Tell me I am wrong...
Tell me there is no calm before the storm.
 

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@Amdusias  CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
I mean it. :) Don't mean to choose favorites but i do enjoy reading your work.:)
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@CrystalH17Luv  Amdusias   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
I do not concern myself usually with the flow and I have no idea what I can attribute to the quality of my writing,so if you truthfully mean what you say,it means a lot to me because I simply can not approach it objectively. I know this message is a bit out of place,but simply saying "thank you" every time seems a bit repetitive and dull. xD I AM grateful,however.
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CrystalH17Luv   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
I really like this poem. I actually like a lot of your poems. They have a smooth flow to them, they're really good.
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@search4me  Amdusias   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
Thank you for your comment,I'll check out his and your work.
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search4me   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
This is very good, very thought provoking. It reminds me a little of DarkSide's work.
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@mysteryU38  Amdusias   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
I am grateful!
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mysteryU38   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
great poem, makes you think
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