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Greed

"Be proud of your country,"

the government says.

"Know your nation's history,"

say they.

"Well how can we,"

we say,

"when half of our history

you keep a mystery?

Like what happened at Roswell?

And how could you live with

knowing about the Guantanamo Bay hell?"

We continue,

"No go on and try,

it's about time this country knows why."

They retort,

"We've always tried to be true,

and when we weren't it was to protect you

so why do you argue?"

"We argue where it's due.

But tell us true,

who was protected by the sin

of Mister $20 Andrew Jackson?

I do believe the Trail of Tears

caused more fears than cheers."

"It was an honest mistake.

Of course it's understood why

we had to forsake

those violent reds.

At least their entire race isn't dead,"

they said.

We reply, "We live in a country

built upon a bloody history.

The world around us is falling to shit

and don't you dare try to deny it.

We are not proud of this country

if we cannot be proud of our history

and that is no mystery.

And what is our proposed theory?

To presently make a better history.

And we will be proud of whatever nation

who does not hand out fiction

where the truth is deserved.

We the people are not your herd.

And if your degrading ways continue

then we will only have time to write haikus

for we'll be so busy planning a coup

against the government that is you.

And when that day surely comes you

can stop worrying about your revenue

because greed will die when you do."

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mernasw   -   1 week ago   -   Reply
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resecir   -   1 week ago   -   Reply
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sparkel126   -   1 week ago   -   Reply
Thats awesome and so very true how much the government hides from us.
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kijiioo   -   1 month ago   -   Reply    Comment voted down   Show
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chettah8000   -   1 month ago   -   Reply
awesome poem
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kitty945   -   1 month ago   -   Reply
WOW vary good I love the way it's put and set...
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whodos   -   2 months ago   -   Reply
AWESOME truely awesome
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YAcht0920   -   2 months ago   -   Reply    Comment voted down   Show
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rjoirjfi   -   2 months ago   -   Reply    Comment voted down   Show
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Borntowrite   -   2 months ago   -   Reply
Yes.
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loverz166   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
so amazing. its so unique.
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graynight   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
Amazing Amazing Amazing very well spoken.
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canuckschmuck   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
"To presently make a better history.
And we will be proud of whatever nation
who does not hand out fiction
where the truth is deserved."

Good luck with finding that nation. This idealism has been around since the 70's. This reminds me of Dylan's "When The Ship Comes In" without the answers to anything. Some clapping hands for you, for speaking out about what's happening and been happening ever since America's "forefathers" brought slaves over from England, but ah... "for we'll be so busy planning a coup / against the government that is you." What kind of coup, hm? What about this coup will "we" do, against they, the government? What 'plans' will "we" be busy planning? This could have been useful in the 50s and 60s. In the 90s and early in the 21st century. It's already been happening (people turning off their televisions, Anonymous shutting down FBI sites, all those Occupy rallies, switching to healthier foods (ones that aren't sprayed with "dis food is blocking mah neural-receptors so i caint get no infomashun so ill just say whaddever anybodee sez is gud fo me" chemicals, people learning how to actually love themselves and others, etc.) You seem like you're on the right track, though. Your inspiration's just in the wrong place. I'd like you to look up three users on Testriffic. TheBlackVegeta, PuffDaddyPuff, and madeinChinax. I think you'll be interested in what they've said in the past.

*starts playing when the ship comes in on guitar*
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cdrake17   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
i love how original and unique this is very nice i enjoy it...
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4nINK   -   3 months ago   -   Reply
If life could only be so simply beautiful like your "Sumi-e Orchid". Keep up the creativity. (:}> DA
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wolfsabor   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
Beautiful absolutly beautiful. Reading this i just picture you on stage at a spoken word open mike night. Verry well done
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deeterDeetz   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
great work
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nayners24   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
this is amazing! its truly inspiring!
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lonestarwaltzi   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
wow! adore this! how well said!
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Angel089890   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
:) Thank you all
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burlesque13   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
*applause crescendos, surrounding your room with the echo of my happy hands* This is amazing. It's poems like these that always remind me why I hate my country so.
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SinT88   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
I really like this..
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demthangs3019   -   4 months ago   -   Reply
wow super good! thumbs up
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